Can't give specific examples now -- it's several months since I read the books -- but perhaps the best way to express it is just that I prefer a more polished style, one that flows more easily.Originally Posted by pinkdaisy226
Just wondering what you meant by that? I vaguely remember thinking the same thing when I was reading his books but I don't remember why.Originally Posted by rapunzel47
His writing style sometimes leaves something to be desired
I love words and language, and would write fiction if I ever had an inspiration