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Hey, I just noticed that there's no fried bologna on the menu... and there's no fried bologna gravy on there either? What gives?

 
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Originally Posted by Hydroaxe

Hey, I just noticed that there's no fried bologna on the menu... and there's no fried bologan grazy on there either? What gives?

You'll have to come to my house for the fried bologna and gravy!
 

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Originally Posted by KittenKrazy

You'll have to come to my house for the fried bologna and gravy!
Okay! Don't forget the mashed potatoes in the middle!
 
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Originally Posted by Hydroaxe

Okay! Don't forget the mashed potatoes in the middle!
Dang it Ryan, now I'm hungry! You really knew which buttons to push this morning, didn't you?
 

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Originally Posted by KittenKrazy

Dang it Ryan, now I'm hungry! You really knew which buttons to push this morning, didn't you?
Well if it makes you feel any better, I didn't have anything spectacular for breakfast either.
 
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Sigh, I've been fiddling with this goofy thing again, I think its looking better than it did, will have to get you guys to give me your opinions again when I get done.
 
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Originally Posted by gemlady

I'll give my opinion as soon as i find my magnifying glass.
Good Grief! What happened? When I left here it was normal sized!!!!


ETA, now its gone huge!

Ok, I think I fixed it that time, somewhere in between gigantic and unreadable!
 

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That looks alright, though I think each part could use some kind of border or trim. It looks there could be room for that.
 

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I like the design, very nicely balanced and not too showy or busy.
The menu is scrumptious. Do you give out samples

I notice you are in Jasper. My family comes from Alabama. Parents currently live in Blount County. Small world, huh?
 
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Originally Posted by unicorn

I like the design, very nicely balanced and not too showy or busy.
The menu is scrumptious. Do you give out samples

I notice you are in Jasper. My family comes from Alabama. Parents currently live in Blount County. Small world, huh?
Very cool!!!
 

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Originally Posted by KittenKrazy

Wanna see something really, really BRIGHT ?
Hmmm... well you weren't really asking for more criticism or tips, but I'm going to risk it. The text looks better bigger, but I think the 3-D thing isn't working the way it is shifting towards the baker. It might look better shifting the other way. Flat may be your best choice though. I'm not sure how to comment on the colors. I love bright colors, but I'm not sure I would do it for that kind of business logo.
 
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That's ok, Ryan, I'm glad for them....The funny thing is, it actually looks better printed than it does on screen, which is a good thing!
 

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I agree with Hydroaxe about a border on the menu. Needs something like that - if just around your baker and name.

Like the background colors onthe business card, but not the 3-D with the name. To me it's a smidge too much.

Can you have more baked goods drawn on the baker's tray? It could give the effect of bounty. And for some reason it looks like the baker (I presume male) has boobs. Yep, my mind is in the gutter.
 
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Originally Posted by gemlady

. And for some reason it looks like the baker (I presume male) has boobs. Yep, my mind is in the gutter.
Jan, I hate to tell you, but I think you've been hanging around Ryan a bit too much lately!
 

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Originally Posted by gemlady

Can you have more baked goods drawn on the baker's tray? It could give the effect of bounty. And for some reason it looks like the baker (I presume male) has boobs. Yep, my mind is in the gutter.
I think that's a good point about the tray. I see what you mean about the baker too now, but I'm keeping my mouth shut. I hope Denise is not offended.
 
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