Hey all! I need your advice and HONEST feedback on a letter that I have to send my school district concerning my interest in a possible job opening. This job opening has not been approved by the school board. I really want to work at the local elementary school. Please tell me what you think, and any ideas would greatly be appreciated. I have never had to write any letters of this kind before. They already have an application on file for me, so that's why I have to write a letter to make them know to look at my application.
Thanks in advance for any suggestions/criticism. Just don't be too harsh in the wording of criticism, please.
Dear Ms. West,
\tI am writing this letter to notify you of my interest in a possible Teacherâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s Aide position at Riverview Elementary. It is my understanding the Aide would be needed for the 1st grade teacher(s).
\tI am already familiar with the schoolâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s policies and procedures, as well as both 1st grade teachers; Mrs. Murray and Miss Wasakoski. I am also familiar with some of the students who will be entering the 1st grade, as I assisted with a student in Mrs. Kreadyâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s kindergarten classroom for the remainder of the 2004-2005 school year.
\tWhile I am not sure of the exact requirements for the position, I have volunteered every day from January to the end of the 2004-2005 school year. In my duties, I assisted on the playground, did laminating and errands for various teachers. And, although I was a volunteer, I conducted myself in an appropriate manner, and treated staff with the same respect as if I were a paid employee. If I needed to take a day off, I notified Mrs. Flanagan or Mrs. Seussmuth with as much notice as possible.
\tYou should already have my application on file, and you will see that I have Mrs. Seussmuth and Mrs. (Christine) Smith listed as references, and while I do not have the other staff mentioned in this letter listed as a reference, you are welcome to speak with them on my behalf. You'll also notice that I have already filed my background clearances. I also had a TB test performed in December of 2004. The results were negative, and I had a note from my doctor with the results. This should also be on file.
\tI would like to be considered for the Teacherâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s Aide position if it becomes available, as well as any other similar positions that may become available at Riverview.
\tThank you for your time. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tRespectfully,
So, what do you think? BE HONEST. Oh, just so you know, the Mrs. Seussmuth that's mentioned? She's the school principal, and Mrs. Christine Smith is a teacher's aide at the school. I did not use staff's first names as a sign of respect and professionalism. I added Mrs. Smith's first name the way I did because their is another Mrs. Smith in the building. Should I include all their first names? And if I do, should I drop the "Mrs."?
Thanks again,all! Ginger
Thanks in advance for any suggestions/criticism. Just don't be too harsh in the wording of criticism, please.
Dear Ms. West,
\tI am writing this letter to notify you of my interest in a possible Teacherâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s Aide position at Riverview Elementary. It is my understanding the Aide would be needed for the 1st grade teacher(s).
\tI am already familiar with the schoolâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s policies and procedures, as well as both 1st grade teachers; Mrs. Murray and Miss Wasakoski. I am also familiar with some of the students who will be entering the 1st grade, as I assisted with a student in Mrs. Kreadyâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s kindergarten classroom for the remainder of the 2004-2005 school year.
\tWhile I am not sure of the exact requirements for the position, I have volunteered every day from January to the end of the 2004-2005 school year. In my duties, I assisted on the playground, did laminating and errands for various teachers. And, although I was a volunteer, I conducted myself in an appropriate manner, and treated staff with the same respect as if I were a paid employee. If I needed to take a day off, I notified Mrs. Flanagan or Mrs. Seussmuth with as much notice as possible.
\tYou should already have my application on file, and you will see that I have Mrs. Seussmuth and Mrs. (Christine) Smith listed as references, and while I do not have the other staff mentioned in this letter listed as a reference, you are welcome to speak with them on my behalf. You'll also notice that I have already filed my background clearances. I also had a TB test performed in December of 2004. The results were negative, and I had a note from my doctor with the results. This should also be on file.
\tI would like to be considered for the Teacherâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s Aide position if it becomes available, as well as any other similar positions that may become available at Riverview.
\tThank you for your time. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
\t\t\t\t\t\t\t\tRespectfully,
So, what do you think? BE HONEST. Oh, just so you know, the Mrs. Seussmuth that's mentioned? She's the school principal, and Mrs. Christine Smith is a teacher's aide at the school. I did not use staff's first names as a sign of respect and professionalism. I added Mrs. Smith's first name the way I did because their is another Mrs. Smith in the building. Should I include all their first names? And if I do, should I drop the "Mrs."?
Thanks again,all! Ginger