Opinions please!

Ok, the sad day has come when I have to take my 3 fosters up to the adoption clinic. While I'd love to keep them all, I know that there are more needy ones out there that will make their way to my house in the future and I'm already pretty full. They think that Oscar and Spanky will get adopted pretty fast (they are still very young) and of course Billie, being older and black, will be harder to place.

Anyway, I've written up their bios that will appear on the web site and probably will appear Petfinder. These are so cheesy to write and I'd like some opinions on them please.

I've included their recent picture, although Spanky's is not very good as he just wouldn't sit still long enough to get a good shot.

I'll post 3 more in a row.

Hi! My name is Billie Holiday and I am a stunning 6 month old black female. Why am I called Billie Holiday? You see someone dumped me and 2 other kittens out in the country and Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]ve got the blues. A kind family took me in where it is warm and I get lots of food and loving. I love to stand on my hind legs and meowl up at my foster parents until they pick me up and snuggle with me and I am a snuggler!! I love to play with my foster brothers Spanky and Oscar and sometimes we just snuggle up in a pile and groom each other or sleep the afternoon away. I would love to go to a home with other cats and, of course, enough people to give me attention ALL day long!

Hi! My name is Spanky and I am a gorgeous white/red tabby male approx 14 wks old...Am I a cutie or what?! _I was dumped with 2 other kittens out in the country and a kind family took me in where it is warm and I get lots of food and loving. My mom thinks Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]m a little rascal cause I love to play a lot…I think that is where she came up with my name. _When my foster parents come to my room, I cant get to them fast enough. _I will crawl all over them & try to groom their chins & noses. _I just LOVE people! _I would love to go to a home with my foster brother Oscar (I really LOVE him), but if I canâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t, then can I have other cats to play with please? And, of course, enough people to give me attention ALL day long!

Hi! My name is Little Oscar, about 11 weeks old and I am the cutest little red tabby male in this place (sssh…donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t tell anyone)! I was dumped out in the country with 2 other kittens when I was about 4 weeks old and I canâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t figure out why. There is nothing I like better in life than to cuddle in a warm lap, except perhaps snuggling or playing with my foster siblings Spanky and Billie. I would LOVE to go to a forever home with my foster brother Spanky (I really love him), but if I canâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t, then can I have other cats to snuggle with please? I have never been alone and I get kind of scared if someone isnâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t with me. And, of course, enough people to give me attention ALL day long!

I think they are very cute! But I'm a cheesy person too! I hope they all get adopted really fast!

omg they are just too precious for words!!!!!!!!!!

I love them all

they are all 3 cuties . I think you did a wonderfull job what you wrote about them it sounds great to me .

Ooooooo I want Spanky!!! Oh he is SO adorable! Do you have any other pics of him?? (I know you said he wouldn't sit still) I've been dying to get a friend for Pepper as he loves to play and I know he's lonely being the only cat in the house. Aww Spanky's just too cute! *sigh*

The bios all sound great btw!

Sounds very good...and Spanky is absolutely gorgeous!

Originally posted by Big Kat
Ooooooo I want Spanky!!!

Oh he is SO adorable! Do you have any other pics of him?? (I know you said he wouldn't sit still)

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You got it! He lifted his head at the last minute on this one:

And another (I tried to settle the boy down):

He really liked the hanging lens cap on the camera....this is up close and personal.....

And lastly.....playing in my poor old tired cat tree in desparate need of new sisal....

Yup, I'm gonna cry when they get adopted!

And not to leave out the others: Oscar came up to Billie and started grooming her head. Billie relaxed, shut her eyes and put her paw over her face.

Oh, I wish I could take them all. I know my heart would break giving these beautiful cats up, but seeing them, I know they will go to a good home. That's how I got my Berk, I saw a picture of him and fell in love immediately. It will happen for them too!!

I think the ads sound great. And the pics are adorable!!

The ads sounds good to me and not cheesy at all. I just love all of them. Billie Holiday is a beautiful girl : They all are! I wish I could take her but Ken want let me get another kitty

These are just great little bio's - sure to get someone hooked They are all adorable - good luck

Originally posted by Momofmany
My mom thinks Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]m a little rascal cause I love to play a lot…I think that is where she came up with my name.

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I love the bios! I don't know how foster mom's give up their little furbabies. . .all three are soooo adorable!

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My only suggestion is to delete the part above in italics. It caught my attention because a person might misinterpret that you spank Spanky. Other than that, it's great to be able to read each of their stories. . .I'm sure they will find good homes.

They are just so adorable!!! And I think you did a great job with the bio's. I am sure they will all find very good homes, you have done a great job with them!