My new web site

It looks pretty good, but there are a few things I noticed. At the top there is a blank white... corner... thingy. I think the banner should go farther out to that point, but I'm not sure if that's part of the theme or what. Also, the banner image should be more related to your site. Perhaps dogs wearing the collars, or something to that effect. The site could also be wider, as on my screen, a lot of it is just purple space. Very nice collars by the way!

I love the collars,they are fantastic,given me an idea for my mils dog for xmas,she loves anything shabby chic (my mil-not the dog) so the floral print one would be just her thing.Do you post to UK?x

Your collars are really cool

Your collars are so cute! I really like them.

In that white space that catbehaviors was talking about, do you think you could put a picture of a dog wearing one of the collars?

I agree about the width, too....there is a lot of purple background. But overall, it's a really good job! Congrats!

For me is elegant & prettie good for the sigth!.. I love it!...

It would be nice if there was more to the descriptions -- like the materials used (nylon, cotton, polyester?), colorfastness, adjustability, etc.

The picture with one of your dogs is so pretty! I'm a fool for border collies...

I looked at the collars even though they are only for dogs.

More comments, you asked for 'em, right? Under "matching sets" you misspelled "coming."

Also, the "smiles with paws" collar is not represented as well as it could be, with the black thread stitched through the yellow happy face (and there's a dangling thread that should be trimmed).

Neither is a big deal but some of us do notice things like that and it detracts from your products. Which, btw, are very, very cool and well-done!

I particularly like the Halloween ones! Hope your business is a success; your products are great.

I can't really give any comment on the website design because I'm clueless on how to do all that, but your products are adorable!! I have 4 dogs and am in need of 3 collars and 1 harness (unless you have a collar that will stay on a pug, lol). I don't have any extra money now, but I've bookmarked your site and will be checking back frequently. Good luck with your business!

I've copied and pasted parts from your website for spelling/grammar. One thing you can do is write out what you'll be putting on it in a word processor and then run the spell/grammar check. I edit mine late at night a lot and it's been a Godsend to have that, lol.

HOME

"I started making collars when I was looking for a new collar for one of my dogs, I just couldn’t find anything that was that unique. When friends saw the collars they asked me to make some for their dogs, things just went on from there.
If you would like to buy a collar for your best friend, just send me an email saying what size neck your dog has and what colours you would like. You can even send me a photo of your boy or girl! Collars start from as little as €10 + p&p. All the collars and leads are made with care, are stitched and riveted for extra strength and come with a little paw rivet on them."

You don't really want to say that you were looking for something a little bit different, it doesn't reflect well with your product. You're leading up to the introduction of your product and basically implying that your product is only slightly different than ones available in stores.

The second paragraph seemed to run on a bit and not flow properly, it didn't make sense to say get in touch with me and send me an email, then continue on with what your require in your email.

I also changed the last part so it made a bit more sense.

" also make collar and lead sets, collars, bandanas and waste bag sets and will also be starting a range of quilts."

Bandanas was spelled wrong and poobag bags sounds gross and repetitive, lol, even though we call them poobags here too.

COLLARS/LEADS AND BANDANAS

Try to take all the photos in the same fashion - same background, same positioning, same lighting, etc. A white or light coloured background would work best, as most of your collars are dark colours. I would also suggest taking the photos with the buckle either at one side or the back. All photos should also be the same size. Keep the descriptions more simple, just the name is all you really need.

SPECIAL OCCASIONS

Autumn is spelled wrong.

QUILTS

"Here is the first snuggly quilt. This one is for a small to medium dog and can be put in thier bed or just on the floor. It is 64cm x71cm, has double thickness quilting and can be washed at 30°. This one has a halloween theme, edged with pumpkins."

I would also suggest adding a contact form on your website. People won't actually read before contacting you, having the form with parts that they have to physically fill out will help to get all of the information you need.

Very nice! I love all of your products! You have some talent!