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Imagine a cat hurt so badly that it has difficulty breathing.
That is called cat abuse. But donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t worry there are lots of
People that help. Like for example the humane society.
They help get animals healthy homes where they get food,
Water, and tender love and care. But while the animals
Donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t have homes the humane society spend there time
Looking for animals. I believe that animals have rights
And that they deserve as much respect as any person.
You know something? A lot of animals each day are born.
About 70,000.well about 10,000 humans are born a day!
Thatâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s not enough homes for every animal. So thatâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s why
We have things like the humane society. What if there where
No places like the humane society for animals to go. Then
What would happen? They could go to the pound. But
That probably wonâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t happen. Chances are the humane
Society will find them or a loving family will find them
So if you have ever lost a pet donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t worry. There
Most likely in the humane society or with someone
Who will love them just as much and for as many animals
That donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t have homes there are about 5 million other
Animals that have wonderful homes with people who
Love them. Thatâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s a lot more then the ones who donâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t.
So take a minute to think about how lucky it is that
Some one started the humane society ** pause**
Now that youâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]ve thought about it lets review some
Ways people avoid hurting animals. Letâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]s see you could
Be a vegetarian. This means you only eat vegetables.
You could be a lot of things that I canâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]t name. Iâ€[emoji]8482[/emoji]m so
Glad I was able to keep you aware of what happens to
Animals.
 

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Are you looking for help? I like the idea of the spech. May I ask, what grade you are in and what type of speech this is?
 

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You do have some good points, but they don't "fit" together. And you need to put related sentences in paragraphs.

Some of the points have nothing to do with the topic of cats, so they don't need to be in there.

Would you like some help in writing and organizing your speech?
 
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Originally Posted by GoldenKitty45

You do have some good points, but they don't "fit" together. And you need to put related sentences in paragraphs.

Some of the points have nothing to do with the topic of cats, so they don't need to be in there.

Would you like some help in writing and organizing your speech?
sure thanks!
 
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Originally Posted by twstychik

Are you looking for help? I like the idea of the spech. May I ask, what grade you are in and what type of speech this is?
i'm not telling you exactly but i'll say that i'm in middle school and yes i'm old enough to be on this site! um as for the speech topic its hard to say. maybe you can send me a PM and you can help figure it out????
 

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Originally Posted by cat_lady

i'm not telling you exactly but i'll say that i'm in middle school and yes i'm old enough to be on this site! um as for the speech topic its hard to say. maybe you can send me a PM and you can help figure it out????
just FYI - minors can't receive or send PMs on this site.
 
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