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Poem I wrote

post #1 of 9
10/19/07 at 6:29am
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A poem I wrote for Phoenix.

You Walk On By

I'm sat in my pen
With people all around
Wondering who to look at
I look at you
But you walk on by
Without a glance.

I'm sat here, lonely and afraid
Looking out at you
But you don't seem to notice me
And you walk on by.

I'm sat here wondering
If any of you will look at me
But no
You walk on by.

I'm still sat here waiting
For you to take me home
My old life was hard
But not as hard as watching you
Walk on by

I can't help my fear
I can't help my past
So I wish you would
Stop and look at me and
Not walk by

I've been here so long
Watching all of you people
But you don't notice me so
You walk on by
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post #2 of 9
10/19/07 at 7:12am
That's so sad
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post #3 of 9
10/19/07 at 7:17am
Thats so sad, you should print it and put it on each pen in the resue center
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post #4 of 9
10/19/07 at 8:19am
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I think we will only need it over the one pen.
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post #5 of 9
10/19/07 at 12:11pm
Aw so sad, Its very easy to believe that is what each animal is thinking when they are ignored.

I love how poems make it easy to communicate thoughts. and in such a visual way too
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post #6 of 9
10/19/07 at 2:21pm
So many kitties see us just walk on by.
Your poem honors Phoenix.
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post #7 of 9
10/20/07 at 2:49am
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Thank you xocats.

If there's any cats you know who need that poem you can use it if you want.
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post #8 of 9
10/22/07 at 10:13am
This is sad. It makes me wish I could get more.
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post #9 of 9
10/23/07 at 2:51am
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We don't need it for Phoenix now - he's been rehomed without help from the poem!
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