Sinking to New Lows

Hello! It's me, Thirtysilver.
Well, I'm pretty far along with my cat story, "The Parking Lot Cats."
I'm interested in knowing what people think about it.
How do you like it so far?
Also, I was thinking about changing the title . . . any suggestions?

Puddy in your hands,
-Ryan

I like the story so far. Don't know about names, though. That's always the hardest part for me.

For those who haven't read it, take the time. It is a good read.

thank you so much for the glowing revew!
like all artists, i crave feedback. Feel free to post me your opinions or email me anytime!
-Ryan

Isn't that funny! I forgot to log Lisa out, and I ended up posting as her.
I checked my email and thought,
"How nice! Lisa's reading my story!"
Ugh.
-Ryan

Ryan, you actually look nothing like me! I have read your story and I do find it very interesting! I am concerned about the activity of the old dog. What is going to happen to him? He isn't going to turn into a cat is he?

The old dog doesn't move around much; he probably doesn't even notice anything's different in the apartment. He goes out, he gets fed, he has no other real needs. He's like furniture.
He'll be fine.
-Ryan

Would you say that the dog is like a "Lazy Boy" piece of furniture? :vampireL:

Ugh.
No, the old dog is not like a chair. Brush him with your toe while he tries to sleep and risk an impromptu amputation. I can't imagine what would happen if one tried to sit on him.
-R


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I am enjoying the story - it is very reminisant of the Tad Williams Tailchaser's Song.

I've never read that book. is it good?
-Ryan

I read part of it, and will read more later, but so far it seems very well written!! You have a talent for this, you could maybe write children's books!!! Good job!

Thank you, Debby! I'd like to write childrens' books . . . but then again I wouldn't. I'd be too tempted to publish titles like:

Johnny Went Down The Haunted Well
Hannah's Dad Should have Locked the Gun Cabinet
or . . .
Mommy Says Don't Touch My Stash

-Ryan

Ryan - that book is excellent! Well worth the read.