i know i asked for help before

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but could i get a critique?

i am composing a trance piece and i'm stuck i took the suggestions from before but now i don't know what's missing or how to end it.....


or a title.....

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so this isn't the latest version but i would love feed back...i'm working on the other right now....
 
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ok - in a couple minutes it should be fine, i was updating the site and that's probably why you couldn't open it.
 

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Wow, it's really cool!!!! I have no idea how it's all even put together so can't give any decent advice, but I like it!!
 
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can you describe any part you like?

here is the updated version:

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it should be working now, i just checked it.
 

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I absolutely loved the first part. I like the fast pace, kind of reminded me of a fast forward subway piece where everything flashes through so fast.

Middle section where it slowed was nice but not my favorite. It was different from everything. You picked up the pace again at the end which I liked.

Sorry I can't help more. I just know I enjoyed listening to it. I liked the beat, the rhythm and the sounds.
 
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