Anyone like Poetry? here's 2 by my Grandson

halfpint

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I think there pretty good, but even if they weren't I know I'd think they were
He Loves Creative Writing, Plus he writes his own Music also
He's 18 BTY



Life of a Photograph

Live above yourself,
Die even higher.
Transcend above the shelf,
Over the fire.

Live among the mantle,
With trophies and frames,
With pictures that channel
Emotions of lost days.

Life is forever,
Atop the stress of wood.
An exhibit to remember,
But no one would.

Death is the finale,
To the photograph lost.
But someone will remember,
How much an open flame will cost.

Ryan


Here's the second one

Suspension

I can wait,
And I intend to.
If this is fate,
Let it suspend you.

Float above,
As you are meant to.
If this is love,
It ties me to you.

I can't leave,
Though I wouldn't try.
I stay, for I believe,
I can make you mine.

I can wait,
And I intend to.
If this is my fate,
Then so are you.

Ryan
 

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They are lovely, he sounds like a very special young man.
 

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Originally Posted by halfpint

I can wait,
And I intend to.
If this is fate,
Let it suspend you.

Float above,
As you are meant to.
If this is love,
It ties me to you.
Both are lovely, but these two verses are my favorites... they're written beatifully. Tell him to keep up the wonderful work!
 
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Originally Posted by Cocoalily

Both are lovely, but these two verses are my favorites... they're written beatifully. Tell him to keep up the wonderful work!
Ah Thanks I will tell him he's a pretty Artistic Guy
 
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